I don’t have the full article text — could you paste it here? I can’t rewrite what I can’t see.
If you only want a sharper, more engaging version of the headline and a short lede based on the title you gave, here’s a safe rewrite that preserves the original meaning without adding details:
Rewritten headline:
Police Investigating Armed Robbery at Whalley Avenue Vape Shop in New Haven
Rewritten lede:
Police say an armed robbery occurred at a vape shop on Whalley Avenue in New Haven and the incident is under investigation.
Send the full article if you want a longer, fully rewritten version.
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