I don’t have the article text — could you paste the full article you want rewritten? I’ll then produce a more engaging version that preserves the original meaning and adds no new facts.

If you meant to rewrite only the headline, here are three concise, non‑embellished options:
– Kingstree police investigate shooting at vape shop
– Shooting reported at Kingstree vape store; police investigating
– Police probe shooting at vape store in Kingstree

Tell me which you prefer, or paste the full article and I’ll rewrite it.